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Post by C William Russette on Feb 7, 2018 14:54:10 GMT -5
I'm nearing the end of the first part of the story. Golightly suggested I share a piece. So here ya go.
Blacklash’s whip shredded the cars seemingly not caring if people were in them or not. Two female employees not from Walker’s department cringed as the mercenary snapped his whip ever closer.
The mag-grav assembly granted Force silent flight as there were no thrusters and it did not burn fuel. Blacklash had no idea Force flew just above him. He had no idea until the woman on the far side of the mercenary started pointing. Force didn’t dare try to position the chest laser for an accurate hit without the helmet. Force raised both hands and unleashed twin beams of concussive force as Blacklash turned around.
The merc took both beams in the side sending him flying into the back end of a Lexus. Blacklash crumpled to the ground. His head bobbed slowly.
“Blacklash, stand down and it can end here, without me hurting you anymore,” Force ordered.
more to come...
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Post by johncheese on Feb 14, 2018 12:59:20 GMT -5
Would really have like to see more, but regardless the title is looking very promosing
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Post by C William Russette on Feb 20, 2018 15:44:24 GMT -5
Thanks, John. Glad yer intrigued. I am trying to get it done before month's end.
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Post by C William Russette on Feb 24, 2018 16:58:51 GMT -5
Just finished the first draft of Force #1. I don't see why it won't be edited and in Dave's inbox by the first of March.
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Post by C William Russette on Mar 3, 2018 23:23:51 GMT -5
So I missed March 1. Its in there now though.
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Post by johncheese on Mar 4, 2018 4:14:21 GMT -5
Cool Beans
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